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看图作文讲评6

看图进行书面表达的基本要求是：认真审图，确立主题，提炼要点，展开联想，变点为句，连句成篇。 要达到这些要求，我们就必须认真审图，善于利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所，以及图（表）中的文字说明和标识来提炼要点；要围绕主题展开合理的想象，切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想。

请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。

注意：1.词数120以上。2.参考词汇：吊销驾照　 revoke a driving license

1、认真看图，确立主题

结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。

四幅图记述了昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，我们可以确立本篇书面表达的主题是：昨天叔叔酒后开车，出事故而受伤，被吊销驾照

2、围绕主题，提炼要点

围绕确立的主题，仔细看图，初步列出每幅图的要点。

第一幅图：与朋友聚会，喝酒

第二幅图：酒后驾车

第三幅图：出事故受伤

第四幅图：住院

3、合理想象，补出要点

将四幅图连起来并结合考虑每幅图中的各个细节进行想象，将隐藏的要点补出来,使故事连贯。

第一幅图：喝酒的地点（可能在朋友家，也可能在小酒馆），根据喝酒的地点确定是谁邀请谁。可能因为高兴叔叔酒喝多了，喝醉了（为下文铺垫）

第二幅图：根据他说的话：No problem可以推断：朋友劝他，他没听，坚持驾车回家

第三幅图：酒后驾车，可以想象开车的情况：蜿蜒向前，撞树出事故。根据第四幅图可推断他没有死而是受了伤。警察到现场，将他送往医院。

第四幅图：因伤势严重，要住院几天；警察对他处罚吊销驾照

4、确定时态，译出要点

确定表达时所用的正确时态，将围绕主题初选出的要点和经过合理想象补出的要点翻译出来。

本篇书面表达是记述的昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，故用过去时态来表达。

第一幅图：Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.As a result he got drunk.

第二幅图：After the meal,his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home,but he didn’t to listen to them,saying“No problem” and insisted on doing so.

第三幅图：He got into the car and drove away.A few minutes later,he was widing his way in the street.And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital.

第四幅图：He had to stay in hospital for several days because of being seriously injurned. He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.

5、连句成篇，过渡自然

对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词或词语以使表达连贯，再加上文章开头和结尾的话照顾到文章的首尾呼应。

My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.

How he regretted what he had done!

My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.

Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.As a result he got drunk. After the meal,his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home,but he didin’t listen to them,saying“No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away.A few minutes later,he was widing his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital.Unfortunately he had to stay in hospital for several days .Worse still he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.

How he regretted what he had done!

See you later!

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