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为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。

注意：1、日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使日记连贯。2、词数：120以上。

3、日期已给出。

Sunday，October 13，2003 Fine

1、审 题

①体裁：日记文体。

②主要时态：一般过去时，描述 我 一天上午的经历。

③人称：第一人称

④要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。

⑤注意日记的格式。

2、简译

为迎接高考，“我”常常复习功课到深夜。

I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination．

I woke up at nine o’clock this morning .

I got dressed.

I rushed into the living room .

Mother was preparing breakfast there .

I got on my bike .

When I got to the school,I found the schoolgate was closed

3、衔接

将图中和图与图之间隐藏的要点挖掘出来。

对第一幅图所反应的内容我们要交待其原因：如：昨天晚上直到12点才睡觉。

Last night I didn’t go to bed until 12 O’ clock．

对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出：（起来后）要洗漱：

I brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.

对于第二和第三幅图之间我们也应该根据常识补出下列要点：

图中的母亲有没有讲什么？（因为时间紧张，母亲没有来得及讲什么）

我去上学肯定要拿什么？（书包）

Before she could say anything，I got my school-bag…

对于第三幅图，我们可以相象一下：“我”骑车往学校赶的路上的心情

害怕迟到受处罚，而拼命地骑车

I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of be late so I rode as fast as I could.

对于第四幅图我们可以推测：因为车骑得快，因而心理感到好象没过几分钟就到了学校．

It seemed only a few minutes before l got to the school.

4、成文

加上过渡词语、改变一些句式，整理成文。

Sunday，October 13，2003 Fine

I often stay up late to go over my lessons

or college entrance examination．It was

not until 12 o’clock last night that I went

to bed.When I woke up this morning,I

found it was already 9 o’clock.I got

dressed,brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.

Then I rushed into the living-room，where

Mother was preparing breakfast．Before

she could say anything，I got my school-

bag，ran out and got on my bike．I was

afraid that I would be punished by the

teacher because of be late so I rode as fast

as I could.It seemed only a few minutes

before I got to the school ．To my

surprise，I found the schoolgate was

closed．I t was then that I realized it was Sunday．

See you later!

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